Chapter One

Caldren was lost.

Walking along a ridge he consulted the weathered map in his hand. Up until this point the map was leading him unerringly towards the destination. He left his entire life behind on the chance that this map and the journal it was folded into were real and he didn’t know what he would do if it turned out otherwise.

He was getting tired – his life as a scholar generally did not include athletic pursuits and the scramble across the rock spree and the climb to the ridge had left him sore and exhausted. The trail was clearly marked up until he got to this ridge and then the paths that were supposed to be were instead dense thickets and scrub pines and twisty mountain pathways that all seemed to circle back on each other. Trying to catch his breath in the thin mountain air he sat down heavily on a felled tree and stared at the map as if he looked at it long enough it would give up its secrets.

He glared at the dense overgrowth and grumbled to himself that he should have brought that sword his father had given him. He had never followed his father and brother into the military, but at least a sword would have been useful for cutting through the dense undergrowth. Perhaps the trail was simply overgrown and he needed to cut his way to his destination. He unsheathed his knife from its belt and stared morosely at it – it would take weeks to try to cut through with the knife which was already pretty dull from cutting wood for the evening fires.

The sun was setting soon and the wind was picking up. Caldren pulled his scholars robes from his pack and put them on. He knew the nights up here would be brittle and as his breath puffed into the night air and started a small campfire outside of a sheltered spot amidst the boulders. He didn’t think anyone was around to see the light of the campfire but he shielded it anyway just in case. He wasn’t doing anything technically wrong but he wanted to avoid any entanglements with imperial troops or bandits who would rob him of his already meager possessions.

Settling in for the night he took out his map again. It was yellowed from age and was annotated in a language he didn’t recognize, which was unusual for him as languages was one of the few things he truly excelled at. He was still unsure what he had gotten himself into. After years of searching for any information on the old magic an imperial officer shows up and just hands him a book detailing a mysterious place in the mountains that might be a lost school? It seemed too easy and he was definitely worried that it was a trap and if he did find the location imperial seekers would appear from behind the scrub pines to capture him.

Shaking his head, Caldren picked a random page in the book and started reading. This is something that he had been trying to uncover for a decade now. Magic – real magic like the mages of old. Not the imperial magic so tightly controlled or the hedge witches hiding in the wilderness. The magic spoken of in the tales his mother would tell him at night by the hearth.

Caldren loved these stories and they filled his boyhood imagination with wonder which lead him to pursue a life as a scholar instead of joining the militia as his father had wanted. He spent his days at his duties as an imperial scholar writing books with the words he was given and managing the library at the imperium. It was during a routine cataloging of captured books that he first found the mention of the school and the library. He was reading a pretty straightforward accounting of a merchant guild meeting when there was an entry detailing a funding request for an explorer who claims to have found Aethervale – the mythical location of the library of Temerith. The entry just notes their name as Malcom Sterling and that they granted him the necessary funds in return for first right to books found in the library.

Malcolm Sterling, the leader of the doomed Blackwood company. Everyone had heard the story of how the fabled company disappeared on its way back from one of their expeditions. Some of their company were found at the edges of the Bonechime woods their bodies refusing to rot away – their sightless eyes still facing the wood. Caldren had always thought the stories were fabricated to keep people away from the Bonechime woods but the more he read the more unsettled he became. There was something wrong with that place. It got its name from the sounds that came from the forest when the wind blew through it – a discordant knocking that seemed to follow no pattern but seemed deliberate.

Caldren suspected something else happened to the Blackwood Company. He couldn’t shake the feeling that the Imperial seekers had found out what Malcolm was attempting to do and took steps to ensure that the knowledge remained hidden. Caldren recalled the legends of Temerith and they all seemed to agree that it cannot be found unless it wants you to find it. Caldren always thought that was strange ascribing intent to a building but the legends were all pretty consistent. He wasn’t sure how they ended up hundreds of miles from their original destination however, and the mystery of that is part of what was keeping the legend alive.

Caldren closed the book and threw some more wood onto the small fire. He stared out into the darkening sky through the hazy blue smoke trying to figure out the mystery of this place. He always loved solving puzzles he was persistent when chasing down ideas and he has this unusual ability to remember things he has read clearly. He sorted through all the things he knew about this place trying to tease out a way to gain access.

Before the rise of the empire Temerith was the place mages went to study and learn amongst their peers. The biggest feature of the place was its massive library. The legends claim that you couldn’t ever enter the library itself as it was a stronghold built to protect knowledge. You’d have to speak to the librarians and they would find you the knowledge you sought. The legends here differ as a few claim the librarians were a subset of mage who specialized in managing the library while others claim that the librarians were magical constructs. One thing the legends all agree on were the clockwork archivists – metallic automatons who would gather and sort the books but also serve as guardians. There were a few descriptions of the in some of the books he’d read and they sounded terrifying. Fabricated from some sort of metallic alloy they stood seven feet tall and moved with a grace the belied their mechanical nature. They were generally viewed as benign until someone foolishly tried to break into the library proper. That’s when the guardians put down their books and according to one of his favorite legends their hands became weapons. Caldren never knew why anyone would try to break into a place that had giant metal guards with sword hands but he guessed that some of the knowledge contained in that library had incalculable value.

All the sources he read indicated that the library is hidden somehow and that only people who can channel the magic can find the entrance. He didn’t agree with that idea entirely as there are records of non mages visiting the library so there has to be a way for the everyday needs of such a place to be met. You need food and trade goods for one and he just didn’t see someone who can channel the very energies of the world opening up a bakery. His best guess was there was a way station where visitors would go first and they would be guided in or they would open the lower areas outside of the library proper at certain times to allow for free movement of people. These were all guesses at best as most of the knowledge of the library and magic itself was destroyed by the imperium after the pogrom. Part of his duties as a scholar was to check for the knowledge and ensure it was destroyed but his small act of rebellion was ensuring he read every page as they would be recorded in his memory and he’d write down anything important in a series of journals he kept hidden under a stone in his chambers. Those books were now secured in oilcloth and buried underneath the willow tree he used to climb as a child when playing outside his home. It wouldn’t do to have them discovered once they realized he was never coming back from his sabbatical.

Having exhausted his knowledge of the place and still no closer to finding an answer. He fished some dried meats from his pack and started to gnaw absentmindedly as he considered his next steps. He’d been here for just under a week and he was still no closer to finding the entrance than when he’d arrived. Was this even the right valley? The mountain range stretched for thousands of miles and there could be hundreds of places that match the description of Aethervale. He felt the frustration grow inside of him. He’d left his entire life behind on this insane gamble and he needed this to be the right place he felt deep down that this was the right place he just wasn’t looking at the problem from the right viewpoint.

He did a quick calculation and figured that he had about another week’s worth of food if he was careful and stretched it out as best he could. He’d already lost a significant amount of weight over the last few weeks in this place eating dried rations and whatever he could scavenge. so he wasn’t sure he could go much longer than a week and still have the strength to climb back out and get to the nearest town which was a small mining town about 20 miles from where he started this fools journey. He had tried catching some fish or hunting small game but he just didn’t have any skills in that area so after a few days he resigned himself to the dried foods he has purchased before heading into the mountains.

Having finished his meager meal he walked down to the river to fill his waterskin. Walking around in circles for hours was thirsty work he thought to himself as the icy water numbed his hands. He longed to bathe or clean his robes but he was pretty sure he’d get hypothermia if he tried either of those things so he trudged back up to his campsite grateful for even the little warmth the fire was providing him.

As he left the woods and entered the clearing where his little fire was he froze. Someone was sitting at his fire.

Goal Met – Write a Short Story (10,000 words)

So I had this idea that had been percolating in my head for a while for a story and I always wanted to sit down and write it out to see what form it would take. I actually had a one note page with some idea snippets and overall themes and worldbuilding but never sat down and stared at the blank page.

I struggled with this goal for a while because I either had so many ideas I didn’t know where to start, or my brain was hiding all it’s good ideas deep down where I keep all the names of my grade school teachers. I didn’t waste all the time though as I added more notes and ideas to my notebook trying to kickstart some good ideas.

I think it was tongue in cheek when the first words I wrote were that the main character was lost as I self identify with that character in a lot of ways. But something happened once I put those words down – the story just started flowing onto the page as all the various parts I had in my Lego bin of a brain started clicking together. I had written chapter one and two, and once I had some sort of progress I knew I needed a bit of a prelude to explain what set all these events in motion.  That also led to another flashback chapter which provides a bit more context as to what he’s doing wandering around lost in the mountains to begin with.

I got a few more chapters in before I started having to map out where the plot was going so I didn’t write myself into a corner. That’s when I started exploring various writing tools and worldbuilding apps (some even AI based) to help build out the world a bit and have a sketch of an outline. As a discovery writer I sometimes create entire new sections because I think the idea is cool and trying to lockstep that to a hard outline would feel constraining. 

The only issue was that I blasted past my 10,000 word goal and I have no plans on stopping. While I don’t fancy myself a professional writer by any means, I really feel like there’s a book here that I should finish writing if only to prove to myself that I can. I’m actually really excited by some of the worldbuilding I’ve created and the characters so even if I’m the only one who reads it I kind of want to see how this plays out.

So I’m marking this goal as done – I wrote the short story in my head and then expanded it to a much greater idea and will be posting chapters on this blog as we go.

Prelude

Prelude | 15 years ago

CCaldren curled up by the fire as his mother settled into her customary spot in the old wooden chair by the hearth. Sleep tugged at his eyelids, but he fought it, as small boys often do, afraid he might miss something important.

“Tell me a magic story,” he said, stifling a yawn. The stories of the old magic were his favorites—the ones where her voice wove spells of its own, making his imagination come alive.

His mother smiled, but it didn’t quite reach her eyes. “Cal, my dear, it’s time for bed.” She shifted in her chair, reaching for him as if to scoop him up, but he wriggled away.

“I’m not tired! Please?”

She sighed, though her lips still carried a ghost of amusement. “Fine, but only a short one. And you must go to bed after—do you promise?”

“Yes, Mom,” he said solemnly, excitement barely concealed as he settled against the warmth of the fire.

His mother turned toward the window, staring out for a long moment, as though watching something unseen in the night. When she faced him again, her usual playfulness had vanished, replaced by something heavier—something that made Caldren’s skin prickle. Then, she spread her hands in a familiar motion, the one she always used to begin a story of the old magic.

Only this time, her voice was different. This time, it carried a warning.

“Before the Empire came, there were men and women who could tap into magic, a power as vast and untamed as a storm. It was a river that could grant great miracles—or consume those who touched it. Only those with the strongest will could wield it without being burned to ash. There were those who healed, those who built, and those who destroyed. Wars were fought, fire rained from the heavens, and men vied for dominion over magic itself.”

Her green eyes met his, and for the first time, Caldren wasn’t sure he wanted to hear the rest.

“But there were others who twisted the power in forbidden ways—ways so dark I will not speak of them, for even knowledge of such things can stain the soul.”

A chill crept over Caldren’s skin. His tiredness evaporated.

“Mother… what’s wrong?” he whispered.

She stood, pulling back her auburn hair and fastening it in place with practiced ease. Her hands trembled. “I’m sorry, Cal. This story won’t end the way you want it to.”

Three sharp knocks at the door shattered the moment.

Caldren flinched, turning wide eyes to his mother. Out here in the marshlands, visitors were rare—especially at this hour.

Her expression hardened. The air around her shifted, crackling with something Caldren had never felt before. Her green eyes flickered, their depths catching an eerie, azure glow. Shadows danced across her face as she lifted her hands—not to weave illusions as she often did, but with intent.

When her fingertips touched his forehead, a jolt ran through him. A force pressed against his chest, like an unseen tide pushing him backward. Yet, somehow, he hadn’t moved at all.

“Cal, listen to me,” she murmured. “I’ve hidden you from them, but I must focus on maintaining the spell, or they will see through it. I cannot protect you if I do anything else.”

Tears stung his eyes. “They’re here for you, aren’t they? They’re going to take you away.”

His mother’s face twisted with pain, but she nodded.

The Empire’s Seekers. The ones who came for people with magic. The ones who were never seen again.

“I thought we were safe here,” she whispered. “I was wrong.”

More pounding. This time, a voice followed.

“Naeris, open the door. If my men have to break it down, it will go harder on the boy.”

The local watch captain. Elam. Caldren had never understood his hatred—only that it had always been there, simmering beneath the surface.

His mother closed her eyes for a brief moment, then turned to him with urgency. “Behind the cupboard, there’s money. Take it. Go to your uncle in Vaelkaris—he works in the Imperial Library. He will help you.”

The door shuddered under another blow.

Her hands found his face, warm and trembling. “Seek the old magic, Cal. Promise me.”

His breath hitched. The old magic? That was impossible. The Empire had eradicated it long before he was born.

But this was his mother. And she was about to be taken from him.

“I promise,” he whispered.

“Whatever happens, don’t move. The magic will make them overlook you, but you must stay still.”

The door finally gave way, crashing open. Elam strode in, followed by soldiers.

They seized his mother, binding her arms. She didn’t resist. Didn’t fight. Just watched them, defiant, as they pulled a hood over her head.

Then the Seeker entered.

Tall, gaunt, dressed in the Empire’s midnight-blue uniform. He walked with a slight limp, his polished boots whispering against the wooden floor. But it was his eyes that made Caldren shudder—or rather, his lack of them. In their place, silvery metal gleamed, streaked with pulsing veins of red.

Caldren froze. Arcinium. The Empire’s cursed gift to its hounds. If the Seeker looked at him, the magic would not hide him.

“Is this the witch?” the Seeker asked, his voice cold, tinged with an islander’s accent.

“Yes, sir,” Elam replied. Then, to his men, “Search the house. Find the boy.”

Caldren’s breath caught in his throat. His mother had healed these men. His father had trained them before he was sent to die in the Emperor’s wars. And yet, they turned on them without hesitation.

The Seeker’s gaze swept over the room, lingering on the table stacked with books. His mother’s books. Stories of heroes. Of magic. Of things the Empire wanted forgotten.

“Burn it,” he said with a dismissive wave.

A small sound escaped his mother’s lips.

Elam grabbed her arm. “Where is the boy, Naeris? My men have searched the house. I’ll see him sent to the Fifth Legion—he’s literate, so they’ll likely put him with the scribes. A hard life, but at least he will live.”

His mother’s voice was calm. “He is somewhere you cannot follow, Elam.”

Then, she stumbled. Fell to her knees. The soldiers yanked her upright and dragged her into the night.

Elam scowled. “Burn this place to the ground. And find that boy—I want him in chains by sunrise.”

The men rushed to obey.

Caldren crept toward the back of the house, easing the cellar door open with a faint creak. He stilled. Did they hear?

The sound of oil sloshing, of fire crackling, answered his question. No time.

He slipped inside, closing the door behind him. Crawled to the far wall, fumbling for the loose brick. His mother had shown him this tunnel long ago, but he’d never imagined he’d need it. Who would want to hurt them?

He pushed the brick. A faint click. A hidden door swung open.

Smoke seeped in from above. The house was burning.

He crawled into the darkness, gripping the guiding rope. His hands bled from rough stone. His knees scraped raw. The panic clawed at him, whispering of men waiting at the other end—waiting to drag him away.

Then—he slammed into the wall.

The tunnel’s end.

He slumped against the stone, chest heaving. She was gone.

His knuckles throbbed, split and bleeding. He punched the wall anyway.

“Why?” His voice cracked. “What did we ever do to them?

He sank to the ground, pulling his knees to his chest.

And when sleep finally took him, it was not rest.

It was escape.